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Digital.Ignition
Non-elitist
Joined: Tue Mar 23, 2010 12:03 pm Posts: 146 Location: England
Country: United Kingdom
Sex: Male
Mood: Tired
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 My poems...
- Parallel World, Parallel Mind -
Mirrored image on another plane. Seperate reality, existance unchained.
I witness the free will of another, Bound to me by concept: a blood brother.
I try to connect, my efforts in vain. Parallel world... Parallel mind... But somehow not the same...
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| Thu May 20, 2010 1:51 pm |
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Digital.Ignition
Non-elitist
Joined: Tue Mar 23, 2010 12:03 pm Posts: 146 Location: England
Country: United Kingdom
Sex: Male
Mood: Tired
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 Re: My poems...
- Red -
Red is the colour of my room. Red consumes me when I'm feeling blue.
Red is when she looked at my face. Red is when he took her away.
Red flowed out to end his life. Red is the jail-sentence at the end of my knife.
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| Thu May 20, 2010 1:52 pm |
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Digital.Ignition
Non-elitist
Joined: Tue Mar 23, 2010 12:03 pm Posts: 146 Location: England
Country: United Kingdom
Sex: Male
Mood: Tired
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 Re: My poems...
- Fate's Game -
I hate you fate. I hate you because you bind me with chains, Confining me in a jail for my mind.
I am faithful to you (although I have no choice), And yet you treat me unfairly, Like in last night's game with my untimely injury. You cut the cards incorrectly, Mocked me and handed me a joker. You cheated! Now my life is in pieces because of you!
How can I adopt your vices, Instead of you tightening the vice that hinders me?
I want to pull the strings, Instead of being your marionette.
I want the threads of my fate to be woven into a beautiful tapestry, A masterpiece, Not a miscellaneous blank page in a chapter of chapters. My page will be illustrated, refined, then published.
I'm tired of being your pawn in this chess game. One day I will corner you with stealthy moves and checkmate you! Then will the timer on the game clock stop?
Let me be! Let me choose my own destiny! Give me the key!
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| Thu May 20, 2010 1:54 pm |
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Suedehead
Everything was beautiful, and nothing hurt
Joined: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:49 pm Posts: 3214 Location: NW England
Country: United Kingdom
Sex: Female
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 Re: My poems...
I don't normally like poetry but those were actually quite good. 
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| Thu May 20, 2010 3:44 pm |
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Digital.Ignition
Non-elitist
Joined: Tue Mar 23, 2010 12:03 pm Posts: 146 Location: England
Country: United Kingdom
Sex: Male
Mood: Tired
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 Re: My poems...
Thanks  They usually concern strange ideas and concepts and are short. I will post more another time.
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| Thu May 20, 2010 4:28 pm |
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Darkd10
Elitist
Joined: Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:46 am Posts: 387
Country: United States
Sex: Male
Mood: Irritated
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 Re: My poems...
Very nice, quite emotion provoking. I love color metaphors. ^__^
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| Sun May 23, 2010 2:55 pm |
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Alberi
Monday Morning Lunatic
Joined: Mon Nov 09, 2009 11:39 pm Posts: 2510 Location: Bavaria
Country: Germany
Sex: Female
Mood: Tired
Status: Away
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 Re: My poems...
Your poems are really good. I enjoyed them, too.  I'd like to read more.
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